Title: Darkheart
Age Category: Young Adult
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: 71,000
Pitch: An arranged marriage becomes a life or death battle of wits when seventeen-year-old Jun turns out to be the key to her fiancé’s fortune and is kidnapped by a deranged pirate lord.
First 250 Word of Manuscript:
If Juniper Singh had known she was going to spend the afternoon on a boat, she would have worn a dress less susceptible to wind. Or, if she had really thought about it, she would have skipped the dress altogether and gone with a structured suit. In navy, perhaps. That way there would be no misconstruing today’s little get-together as anything but business.
She clutched her long skirt to keep it from blowing upward as she followed her parents on board, her wedged sandals tapping loudly against the metal ramp. The sun was sharp and hot, reflecting off seemingly every drop of water in the harbor, and Jun briefly thought about using the brightness as an excuse to fake a headache.
No. Amateur move. She could do better.
Their host, Haman, gestured to the vessel with a dramatic wave of his arm, like a child trapped in a forty-year-old’s body presenting an art project to his mother. “What do you think of her?” he asked, raising his sunglasses to get a better look at his guests, although his gaze settled longest on Jun.
Jun fished stray hair out of her mouth, desperately wishing for a hair tie. Or a noose.
“Pointless,” she wanted to say, but instead went with, “Is a boat like this really necessary?” which was the same thing, really, but at least she’d made sure her voice sounded in lady-like good humor. Despite the effort, her mother pinched her arm to make her shut up.
It’s the perfect weather for a stroll along Gumdrop Pass! Please send a query, synopsis, and the first fifty pages (Word documents will suffice) to ssulaiman@talcottnotch.net — and don’t forget to mention #PitchMadness in your subject line. Thanks—looking forward to my read!
Good luck,
–Saba
I was so distracted by this fabulous voice that I fell into the Cherry Pitfalls! Please send your query and first 100 pages, along with a synopsis, to lauren@triadaus.com with “Pitch Madness: YA Fantasy DARKHEART” in the subject line. I look forward to reading! ~ Lauren Spieller, TriadaUS http://www.triadaus.com
I’d love to read this as I go down Gumdrop Pass! Please send the first 50 pages, query and synopsis to chquery [at] mcintoshandotis [dot] com with Pitch Madness request in the subject line.
You had me at deranged pirate lord. ;) Gumdrop Pass please: Query/synopsis plus first 50 pages to: kari@bradfordlit.com.
Love this! Definitely curious to read on further.
Gumdrop pass for me, please. I’d love to see the query and first 50 pages. Please feel free to send to me at lara@andreabrownlit.com with “Requested: PitMad” in the subject line. Thank you!
So late to the party, but this sounds amazing! Please query me at http://QueryMe.Online/1067 and put Pitch Madness in the referral section. Thank you!